Chozz's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Motive (Original Mix)]

Decent tune! Drums are tight. Bass could do with sitting a little more prominent in your mix.

DreamEater responds:

Thanks for your feedback, I definitely agree the bass is pretty odd. I was experimenting with that warble bass sound and this is essentially where I left it after hours of farting around.

[Akon- Right now DrumnBass]

Not sure if this will be allowed on Newgrounds. That depends on where you got his voice sample from? If you've asked Akon himself i'm sure it will be fine.

Karten responds:

Akon would never have time to answer someone like me. But if they have a problem with putting his voice into a drum and bass song promoting him. And not earning anything myself except pleasure of contributing and making music. Wich I think is fun. They can send me a message.

[I Don't Know What To Call It]

I enjoyed this. I might get into making some 8 bit tunes soon haha.

However ive given you 3 star review (Gave you a 5 on the vote cause peeps are obv zero bombing you or giving you zeros without leaving reviews) because the name you've given it is rubbish ;)

You've also tagged it as metal and rock :P

metroidfannumber1 responds:

I thought I fixed that! Seriously though thanks! Just wish something on this site would work...

[The Smiling]

First time I listened to it I thought that bass was off beat. But when I listened to the song the second time closer it's definately not. This song would be perfect if you defined the bass a bit more.

Love the breaks at 2:23.

N8-Music responds:

Thanks man cheers!

[Nemesis of the North]

Good stuff. Although I'm not fond of the bells, but that is just taste.

c-ryan responds:

They certainly aren't for everyone, I happen to love them though. Cheers for listening!

[Head in the Game]

It's good! Drums are nice and clean. You could layer that lead bass synth sound a bit more ;)

anyproblems123 responds:

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind XD

[Mech Pilot 2]

Good to see industrial is still being made on the AP. Decent song, all clear. Lacking some low end though, do you have a sub?

AliceMako responds:

This isn't a bass heavy track, thanks for listening.

[: industrial streets |Demo| :]

Cool

Nice sound industrial song. Some really nice layers going for you, everything compliments each other.

If your going to be taking this seriously, one of the main floors for me as a listener, is the clipping, it comes when the crash comes in.

You can work on making the drums sound clearer, more character, cause they are a very nice aspect of the song. In fact if you could work on the clarity of each separate sound, this would make it awesome.

I don't think there are many flaws with the structure of the song.

As a listener, seeing that this is a demo, i'll come back and check it when the full version is out.

Good job dude

Warhector responds:

Hey, thanks for good review : D
im going to work on those things you mentioned :)

[Flood of consequences]

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Good work man, it's got a lot of energy to it.

Try and work on your eq for the drums, get them sounding more defined. Also the guitar sounds nice at the moment, could use a bit more tweaking i guess!

The opening riff is sinful by the way... and I like it >=)

Keep it up!

of-wolf responds:

Thanks!
I've been working on building a guitar tone, messing around with mics, amps and straight recording. The drums need a lot of work, Fruity Loops is new to me. I'll probably redo the whole thing when I have more songs under my belt.

[Brittle Nature(A Cruel Breeze)]

4/5

Very nice man, good job for the tools you've got.

It's got a very nintendo 8bit sound to it, and that bass is cool, deep and heavy. Some nice riffs too.

The bits i'd work on is getting a fuller sound with each instrument, especially the drums.

Very cool, Kudo's. Good luck with RAC! Check mine out when you have the time

Kirbyfemur responds:

My main problem with the drums are the fact that the kck and snare are the best sounding parts i could find in Fl, but the Hi-hat sounds suck balls lol.

And I'd work more on this, Well I probably could still, but the problem is i can't save on Fl so like i said i have to start it over again, so i might fix the drum problem, but accidentally mess up the rest of the instruments in the eq process and wont be able to fix it.

Anyays tanks for the review i'll check yours out. =3