Chozz's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brittle Nature(A Cruel Breeze)]

4/5

Very nice man, good job for the tools you've got.

It's got a very nintendo 8bit sound to it, and that bass is cool, deep and heavy. Some nice riffs too.

The bits i'd work on is getting a fuller sound with each instrument, especially the drums.

Very cool, Kudo's. Good luck with RAC! Check mine out when you have the time

Kirbyfemur responds:

My main problem with the drums are the fact that the kck and snare are the best sounding parts i could find in Fl, but the Hi-hat sounds suck balls lol.

And I'd work more on this, Well I probably could still, but the problem is i can't save on Fl so like i said i have to start it over again, so i might fix the drum problem, but accidentally mess up the rest of the instruments in the eq process and wont be able to fix it.

Anyays tanks for the review i'll check yours out. =3

[Mista S he so gay]

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Boring, not much rhythm to it. It lacks layers of sounds.

You could probably actually rap a little bit if you worked on your song writing. As for the song writing, it sounds like something a pubescent teen would write...

I gave you a 1, because at least you made an effort... I think.

barter56 responds:

Thanks for the comment. I'll work on my song writing skills.

It sounds like a pubescent teen wrote it because thats who i aimed it at...the pubescent teens in my music class that refused to write raps.

[Industrial Meltdown (EQ)]

This

Is a sexy loop.

Equation responds:

I'm a sexy kinda guy ;)

[[EC] The Showdown]

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Some nice video game songs you've got :) Good concept, the music fits the song title.

I absoloutley love the keys run at 2:12, that is class! Then it drops into that nice melodic bit. I also love the Keys + Arp at about :52, nice.

One thing I might suggest, is maybe a bit more definition on your sounds, unless this is the sound that your going for.

8/10

EmperorCharlemagne responds:

I too would like things to sound better, but I scour the internet for the 'best of the free', so to speak, so things don't always come out perfectly, and I realize that. Thank you for the nice review! : )

[Reason.]

Bootiful

Very nice choice of layers, the drums fit in perfectly too. It does get a tiny bit boring though, maybe more automation and effects :)

Nicely EQ'd

Nicely Layered

Good song structure.

9/10

JebusAndTheHolyYoses responds:

Thanks for your feedback!

[Anodra]

Interesting

Very interesting bunch of sounds there.

The beginning bit sounds like it could be the start of a NIN song off the ghosts album.

I'd label it dark wierd and strange. Its good. 7/10 for you sir.

Could you PM the address of the forum?

That-Is-Bull responds:

http://forums.somethingawful.com/show thread.php?threadid=3212051

Accounts cost money though :(

[Daylight (the musical)]

Pretty

Really good, I enjoyed it. Deserves a download and a 5/5 vote for me.

If you could be so kind and send me the lyrics? I'd like to have a browse :)

soundhacker responds:

Really???? well ok, well ive also uploaded the same song with the lyrics in, i think its called daylight, the musical final. im not sure. not as good as this 1 tho. no where near, (according to some people)
(http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/261834)
(without the space between to list en!!!)
(lyrics start 40 seconds)

lyrics:
when she called me old, my own
ive bin falling into pieces.
and i know, that ths, wont be over til the morning,
this......time.......
ive bin rapped around your finger and i...............will................r ise....................

can u feel me fighting,......... fighting for you.........
and i swear that ill get through......... to you...........

(chorus)
and its getting to strong, and i cant hold on...........
its pushing you away.....
and its getting to strong, and your almost gone,
and im holding for daylight...............

deep inside, your mind,
can you see that i am weeping,
and i cant hide..........
the fear, that youll be gone before the morning,
this time we could have bin together,
and i.......... wont let go.................

(chorus)
and its getting to strong, and i cant hold on...........
its pushing you away.....
and its getting to strong, and your almost gone,
and im holding for daylight...............

..........
(this section spits into 3 people singing!!!)

1. sleep now close your eyes
your times gone now ure mine.

2. sleep now close your eyes
your times gone now ure mine. (highr pitch)

3. dont let go...................
stay with me....................
dont let go.................
stay with me....................
dont ever let go...............
stay with me.........

(all voices die out and then 1 person says:)

and im holding on to daylight!!!!!........................
..

[Too Filthy For You (Dubst]

Nicely done

I'm not really into the whole dubstep scene. But this is finely produced.

Keep it up man.

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Dubstep isn't for everyone. But thank you for reviewing fairly and not just based on your genre preference.

Thanks again,

Jimbo

[Monodisc - I Am Sorry Part I]

beautiful

Really enjoyed that intro :) The song has a lot of emotion to it.

Good work

tijnn responds:

Thanks, i'm glad you see that (:

[CountryPop]

Yeaaaaa

Pretty wicked, like the synths, and the drum breaks.

Good Work :)

ghook responds:

Ta :)